The people who look at movies and these and say "Wow you can't draw worth shit, I'm going to blam your ass," are just kind of dumb. This is what Newgrounds is about. Having hilarious movies like this. It's fine for there to be some better drawn, serious movies, but stuff like this is what is really worth watching. Besides, most people who would blam this because of the crappy graphics have no taste whatsoever in Flash movies, and probably can't draw themselves. The style of this Flash movie calls for second rate graphics, it makes it so much more funny. There's a certain style to this movie that not many people can pull off, so I wouldn't be so quick to dismiss this movie as crap.
Make a better plot and this would have been a pretty decent movie. Oh yeah, and you might want to make the play button stop all sounds before the sound starts again, that way you can watch it multiple times.
This would be the code for the button:
Funny, and like the last guy said, very good style. I think you should make more of these.
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